What Makes You Stop Reading?


I've had difficulty deciding what to blog about this month. This is something that happens to me every so often. The last time... last year, I defaulted to a Top 10, which turned into a whole string of them. So not doing that again this month.

Instead, I'm going to chat about writing and reading. More precisely, about writers and readers.  Actually, about one writer/reader in particular. Myself.

Y'all know I'm a slow snail writer. I'm a slow reader, too, especially when I'm reading a good novel. I love to take my time and mosey through the story reading it at my own speed. I rush through some pages and linger over others, often reading them more than once. I read all kinds of novels by all kinds of writers.

Currently, I'm reading a new novel by a well-known NYT bestselling author who writes mostly suspense thrillers. Everything was fine until a little before the halfway point. The chapter d-r-a-g-g-e-d. I thought I would never get through it. It contained a lot of detail that was somewhat repetitive and dull. It was a long chapter, nearing twenty pages, that had little to do with the story. I wondered if it was something that should have been omitted and was overlooked. Toward the end of the chapter, the reason for it being there showed up. It shouldn't have taken up 20 pages of the book. But it did. Ten would've been tighter and more appropriate. In my opinion, which is worth what you paid for it.

I left the book alone for about a week. I really didn't know if I wanted to finish it. Finally, I decided to try another chapter. It was back to all the previous chapters, filled with movement and voice. So I kept reading.

A few chapters later, the main character did something mystery writers learn early on to never do to their main character. I was like What!?

It took me only a few seconds to see a different way the author could've achieved the same result that wouldn't have caused the problem it did. Would my option work as the story moves forward? I don't know, but so far it makes no difference in the story. In fact, I'm actually wondering why that small bit needed to be there at all. I thought I knew, but I'm less certain now. I'm nearing the end, and I'll continue reading. So far, the rest of the story has been as good as the first part. Updating: I finished this book, and this incident that bothered me had zero to do with the rest of the story. It should've been cut. Again in my opinion.

I'm not saying that I expect something close to perfection in any book I read. No book is perfect. What I'm saying is that I don't enjoy being pulled from a story by a sloppy chapter and a beginning writer mistake, especially when the book has been written by a acclaimed professional author. Both author and editor should know better.

I noted some other things that aren't worth mentioning and that we all miss at times. Things like time inaccuracies and what-was-available-when type things. More thorough research would have helped, but sometimes I'm guilty of this sort of thing too. It didn't affect the story here, and that was okay with me.

How would you handle this? Would you blow it off and keep reading or stop at the first incident of something not quite right and close the book? Or are you somewhere in between? Like me.

In this instance, I'm glad I continued reading. The story was great overall, with lots of ups and downs and many surprises along the way. 

Disclaimer: The image above is from a random book I pulled from my shelf. It is not the book mentioned here. It did, however, let me see how much dust had accumulated up there. #notagoodhousekeeper because life is more fun to let dust just do its own thing :) 

See y'all next month :)


Comments

Liza said…
I think one of the hardest thing about being a writer is how critical it makes us as readers.
I'd probably keep reading but annoyed doing so. I remember reading a book where the author spent two whole pages describing this character and what she was wearing and then we never saw her again. What was the point?
What stops me from continuing in reading a book is not necessarily typos or even inconsistencies but its the writing style. I need to be interested in the story. I have ADHD and a writer needs to keep my attention.
Jemi Fraser said…
I'm not sure I would have finished it. When a book is a slog to read, I tend to move on to something else. Glad you did and found it entertaining overall
L. Diane Wolfe said…
I doubt I would've finished it. That's the downside to being a writer - we can see better ways to tell a story and stuff that drags really stands out in a story.
Natalie Aguirre said…
I often stop reading books I can't get into. And that includes some NYT bestselling novels. I don't like books where the plot drags too much. That's a big reason I stop reading.
H. R. Sinclair said…
Dragging chapters are rough. I pay close attention to my beta readers regarding that and start tightening things up.

PS: My blog feed URL has changed.
Carol Kilgore said…
Liza - I agree. It makes it difficult for me to draw the line sometimes.

Alex - Exactly. There was a lot of detail throughout this book, but it did a great job of deepening the characters, who I loved a lot. Most of them :)

Teresa - Yes! I have to like the voice, and either like and/or accept the first characters I meet in order to continue. Typos don't bother me unless they go on and on...

Jemi - Characters and voice. They captured me, and I kept reading.

Diane - I close a lot of books before finishing. Life's too short!

If I don't like a book no matter how popular it is, I stop reading it. There's nothing more disappointing to an avid reader than to come across stuff like you mention. It should have been better than this, I have said too many times. But then it's that much more rewarding to finish a wonderful book that gets it right.
cleemckenzie said…
The first comment on your post by Lisa is something that has become something of a problem for me. I no longer belong to book clubs. I haven't been kicked out of one yet, but I've come close. I found that nobody wanted to hear my analysis. They only wanted to say they liked it or they didn't. I kept asking, "Why?" That seems to be a no-no. Writers are more critical than non-writers, but I love that. As to what I would have done if I'd been reading that book you mentioned, I think I would have continued reading, especially if I had been engaged before that stultifying chapter. Now, you've made me curious enough to want to read that book.
Carol Kilgore said…
Lee - I'm more critical, too. I was engaged before. I loved the characters and the voice and the subject matter. I'm emailing you the title and author.
If I reach a boring bit in a book, I'll either skim ahead or just stop reading the book, depending on how much I was previously engaged in the story.
If there are too many characters or characters without a brief re-introduction after being off-stage for a while, I'll stop reading.
Carol Kilgore said…
Lynda - I do that if it's early on. In this book, the boring chapter was well past page 100 and I was all in until that point.

Elizabeth - Ooh, that makes me crazy too :)

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