Guest Blogger: Clarissa Draper
I'm thrilled to have Clarissa Draper guest blogging here today. Clarissa is one of my earliest blogging buddies and a good friend. She also writes the kind of book I love to read :)
Clarissa is doing a big giveaway on today's post. One lucky commenter will receive a $10 Amazon gift card. If you haven't yet purchased your copy of THE SHOLES KEY, please say so in your comment - she is giving away two copies of her book in your choice of print or ebook.
Clarissa is doing a big giveaway on today's post. One lucky commenter will receive a $10 Amazon gift card. If you haven't yet purchased your copy of THE SHOLES KEY, please say so in your comment - she is giving away two copies of her book in your choice of print or ebook.
Contest runs today and tomorrow (Wednesday and Thursday) and ends midnight central time Thursday, May 24, 2012.
Whether you are a mystery writer--like me--or you write another genre, you must provide your readers with a mystery. Each book should have questions, a mystery for the reader to decipher.
The Sholes Key Summary:
All across London, single mothers are vanishing. Margaret Hill, mother of two, walked out of her house two months before, never seen again. A month later, Carrie-Anne Morgans takes her two-year-old son for a walk in the park and disappears, leaving him alone in his stroller. Lorna McCauley leaves her London flat in the early hours of the morning to buy medicine for her sick child and does not return.
Newly promoted Detective Inspector Theophilus Blackwell is assigned the case of Lorna McCauley, which on the outside seems to be a simple case of mid-life crisis and child abandonment. Elsewhere in London, MI5 analyst, Sophia Evans, is working undercover to catch an animal rights group responsible for targeted bombings. As Sophia's case (and her personal life) fall to pieces, she receives a strange envelope in the mail. It contains a picture of Lorna McCauley's lifeless face along with a daunting code.
Now the police and MI5 are forced to work together to stop the murders, and Sophia must find her way into the terrifying mind of a serial killer.
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Writers: Keep the Readers Guessing
Whether you are a mystery writer--like me--or you write another genre, you must provide your readers with a mystery. Each book should have questions, a mystery for the reader to decipher.
Who
is the killer?
Will Romeo & Juliet be together in the end?
Will Luke learn the Force? Will he defeat Darth Vadar?
What is Rosebud?
Will Romeo & Juliet be together in the end?
Will Luke learn the Force? Will he defeat Darth Vadar?
What is Rosebud?
As soon as one question is answered, another should be there
to take it's place until the end, when the last question--the main question--is
answered. However, the challenge that all writers face is finding a balance
with the mystery they present.
(1) Too many questions
It's wonderful to ask your readers to solve a difficult mystery. However, give them enough clues to solve it. If you don't and then add more questions (mysteries) or give them an out-of-the-blue solution, your reader will find it impossible to keep up with the story, lose interest, become frustrated and give up.
(2) Too many answers
You can't make it too easy either--predictable means boring. They will feel cheated because they haven't been challenged.
(3) The right amount
Keep the reader guessing. Give them a good mystery but just when they think they've solved it, something comes up to make them question their answer.
What story have you read lately that kept you guessing? Kept you reading to find out what would happen in the end?
My Biography:
Clarissa Draper, a Canadian currently living in Mexico, spends most of her time composing, planning, and writing code-based mysteries. Although she has written from an early age, she started writing full time in 2006, and is currently writing her third mystery in the Evans/Blackwell series.
(1) Too many questions
It's wonderful to ask your readers to solve a difficult mystery. However, give them enough clues to solve it. If you don't and then add more questions (mysteries) or give them an out-of-the-blue solution, your reader will find it impossible to keep up with the story, lose interest, become frustrated and give up.
(2) Too many answers
You can't make it too easy either--predictable means boring. They will feel cheated because they haven't been challenged.
(3) The right amount
Keep the reader guessing. Give them a good mystery but just when they think they've solved it, something comes up to make them question their answer.
What story have you read lately that kept you guessing? Kept you reading to find out what would happen in the end?
My Biography:
Clarissa Draper, a Canadian currently living in Mexico, spends most of her time composing, planning, and writing code-based mysteries. Although she has written from an early age, she started writing full time in 2006, and is currently writing her third mystery in the Evans/Blackwell series.
The Sholes Key Summary:
All across London, single mothers are vanishing. Margaret Hill, mother of two, walked out of her house two months before, never seen again. A month later, Carrie-Anne Morgans takes her two-year-old son for a walk in the park and disappears, leaving him alone in his stroller. Lorna McCauley leaves her London flat in the early hours of the morning to buy medicine for her sick child and does not return.
Newly promoted Detective Inspector Theophilus Blackwell is assigned the case of Lorna McCauley, which on the outside seems to be a simple case of mid-life crisis and child abandonment. Elsewhere in London, MI5 analyst, Sophia Evans, is working undercover to catch an animal rights group responsible for targeted bombings. As Sophia's case (and her personal life) fall to pieces, she receives a strange envelope in the mail. It contains a picture of Lorna McCauley's lifeless face along with a daunting code.
Now the police and MI5 are forced to work together to stop the murders, and Sophia must find her way into the terrifying mind of a serial killer.
Comments
I din't have a copy of THE SHOLES KEY yet, so I've love to be in the drawing.
I don't have your book yet, but I just started reading the prologue on amazon and wow! You really drew me in right from the start!
It's a real challenge to balance the questions and answers.
@Rula Sinara - I'm glad you like the third point. I'll put you in my drawing as well.
@Carol Kilgore - AWWW, but I like those cabana boys!
@LR - Thanks!
Great post!
These are great tips.
To answer the question, it wasn't a book that kept me quessing but a movie. I don't think I'm easily fooled and yet, I never saw the ending coming.
T
Although I haven't read the book recently, the one that kept me guessing the most was Beth Revis' A MILLION SUNS.
The last story I read that kept me guessing was The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo (once the proper mystery started - not the rubbish about the Millenium magazine - boring!!!)! Take care
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Good tips, Clarissa. I can't stand reading a book and not being able to keep things straight. Too many unanswered questions usually does that. Wishing you success with the book!
Already have her book on my iPad as well.
@Laura - thanks!
@Journaling Woman - question for you, did you try and figure out the code?
@Kyra Lennon - that's great. I'll put you down for the draw for a free e-book too.
@Cherie - Awesome, hope you like it. I'm also going to check out 1000 suns.
@Old Kitty - I've heard a lot about the Dragon Tattoo. I'll have to check it out.
@J.L. Campbell - thanks.
@Michael Offutt - yeah, a bit much, huh?
@KarenG - thanks! I'm so glad there are people who like it.
@Johanna - maybe you'll win the draw and can get it for free!
@DL - thanks! You're the best.
@Alex - Goldilocks! Exactly.
Clarissa, I'm ashamed to say I haven't bought your book yet but if I don't win, I will be sure to abscond it in the old-fashioned way of shelling out some coin.
Thanks for including the Goodreads link -- going to add Sholes Key to my TBR list right now. Thanks for the fun guest post, Carol & Clarissa!
@Cynthia - Thank you!
@ Nicki Elson - that's one reason I love reading Agatha Christie again. Now that I know who did it, I can watch how she sprinkles in the clues.
Hey, maybe that was the day I felt compelled to wave back - the day you say you drove past our town on your vacation!!
My daughter is still struggling, and I really can't spend the time I used to spend on blogging. But I don't intend to ignore my closest blogging friends. I'm going to read and review their books as I read them; I just might not be too speedy. I turned 72 on May 13th, and really don't feel like a spring chicken anymore! Add to that my daughter's mental and menopausal (really bad hot flashes) problems, and my losing an aide, again, and my being stressed by my oldest daughter and granddaughter. I really do have to de-stress/relax!
But today I did also manage to review Glynis Smy's book, and I'll review yours when I get the awesome chance to read it. I stopped by Clarissa's today and saw you have a cover. And now I see it here, too! PLEASE let me know when it's out so I can buy it. Next to memoir, I love murder mystery/crime fiction. So I'm really excited about yours!
As Ever, Ann
Congrats to both you ladies for having new novels gracing the world.
Always love a good mystery Clarissa and I am looking forward to reading yours.... Your advise/tips on writing an intriguing mystery is really helpful. Thanks Clarissa.
Carol, I love the intense color and graphics of your cover, it is DEFINITELY an attention getter!
Great post!
Thanks for hosting Clarissa, Carol. Your book cover is gorgeous.
Denise
Carol, your book cover looks amazing, and I can't wait to find out more about it! Best of luck with both of your mysteries! Julie
Tiki Hut - is a good place to hang out .. and glad you had a good vacation .. while your book cover looks amazing .. cheers Hilary
Carol, your book cover is fantastic and I'm sure the story will be too.
Mason
Thoughts in Progress
I like what you had to say. I think it holds true for a lot of fiction. Thanks for giving me a different way of thinking about it.
Waving at Carol! Congrats on your book too. Another one I must get.
And thanks to everyone for stopping by to make Clarissa's visit a success. I met some new faces, and I hope you'll decide to visit the Tiki Hut again soon.
I read more fantasy than mystery, but yes, there are always questions to be answered by the story.
.......dhole
Love your book cover, Carol. Very attention-grabbing!
I've just finished Clarissa's The Scholes Key and loved it. A wonderful book that kept me guessing right to the last page. A very clever story. Will be posting my review soon.