Truth or Dare
Truth
Many of us here are fiction writers. We create people. We place them in stressful situations. Our creations lie, cheat, steal, make love. They embarrass us, make us laugh, make us cry.
Or they should.
If our characters don't make us experience their emotions when we write them, they won't make a reader feel them either. In order for our characters to come to life, we can give them deep dark secrets and make sure they show us the truth.
Let's call our character Lucy. Is Lucy afraid of failure?
If so, have her tell us, Show us in something she does. Maybe she doesn't put in for a promotion because she's afraid she'll mess up and lose her job. Maybe she pushes others away because she's scared of failing in a relationship. Show us how she feels.
The reader needs to be able to smell her sweat, taste her tears, feel the pounding of her heart, her frustration, her fear.
But the real truth comes from the writer. We have to be true to ourselves. We must be unafraid to explore these emotions and set our characters free to experience them. Sometimes this requires us to dig deep. If we don't bare our emotions, our characters fall short.
Dare
After you've shown us Lucy's truth, dare her to try something new. Something important. Something she must try and can't fail doing without severe consequences. Force it on her.
Take her emotions and whip them into overdrive. She won't comply willingly. Narrow her options until she has no other choice. Watch her squirm.
Truth or Dare.
Comments
GREAT advice, dear one. Today I just might take it.
Patti
Helen
Glad I learned enough to ignore her advice!
Terry
Terry's Place
Romance with a Twist--of Mystery
Great post.
CD
Helen - So true.
Terry - The bad stuff is what makes a great read!
Clarissa - I'm editing now. I need my protagonist to hate me more :)
Talli - I know, right?
Thanks for the great advice.
Donna
Laura - I agree.
Donna - You're welcome.
Jane - I'm usually up for anything outside the box to get my point across - LOL.
Thanks!
Cassandra - You're welcome.
Chick Lit Shorties - Right. I totally agree. Thanks for commenting :)
Lee
Tossing It Out
Arlee - Exactly. It's not always easy.
And I'm so glad to see your picture! I really like to see bloggers' pictures, preferably ones that are kind of close to the real age (I make allowances for such "older" people as me, especially when the camera's not kind!). I assume this is one view of you (lol). I also love your banner picture. That seems to fit your blog.
Showing the characters' emotions is crucial. Why else do we read stories if not to get inside people?
Ann
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Elizabeth - Thanks for visiting the Tiki Hut and commenting. This is one of the most important things we can do.