Wandering Words
Apologies for the tardy post.
First, I got a late start.
Then an old friend called midway in the writing of this,
and we talked longer than I thought.
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One of my friends is a poet. Every day he writes at least one poem that he sends to me. Most are short. A lot of them make me laugh. A few bring a tear. Some are profound.
Today's poem was about wandering words. He compares them to orphans searching for a home.
Think about that.
How many times do we use words familiar to us in our work? These words are like family.
I'm not especially talking about those that make our Search & Destroy lists - like just and was. I'm talking about other words that everyone knows.
I was going to give some examples here, but I realized that like our Search & Destroy lists, these words are probably different for each of us. My own tend to vary by project and even by chapter.
These are everyday words. Words that often are shortcuts. There's nothing wrong with them, but we use them more often than we should and rarely recognize that we do so.
So here you are, deep in the story, writing away, and you raise your gaze from the screen for a moment to give your eyes a rest. Look! On the horizon . . . see those words in the scraggly line?
Call to them.
When they approach, look them over. Have a chat with one or two. Do any look familiar? See if there are any in the bunch that might be willing to stick around for a bit, maybe do a little work for you.
Who knows?
You might even find a new member for your word family.
Comments
Thanks, Carol!
Elspeth - I use the thesaurus a lot, too.
Kimberly - 'That' can be a huge bugaboo. I still delete my fair share of those, too.
It's easier to spot them in the work of others than it is to see and kill them in your own work.
Helen
Straight From Hel
But there's always the caveat -- don't use "writerly" sounding words; they're probably not your voice.
Then it wouldn't let me comment here on my own blog!
So I went away for a couple hours and I'm trying again.
So thanks to all of you for commenting. I hope it didn't take you as long as my few comments so far today have taken me.
BTW, I totally agree about those writerly-sounding words.
Best Wishes, Galen.
I loved your post. I found you by way of Karen Gowen. I'm so glad. Loved the poem at the beginning.
Feel free to stop by and become a follower at my blog too. Maybe you'll win my contest.
Great post.
PS. I couldn't make your post a comment link shows it face for a while.
Galen - I agree. Writers, especially, need to choose their words with care. Sometimes, I dash off something without really paying attention. I always wonder if it's going to come back and bite me.
Elana - Your posts definitely inspire me, so I'm happy I could return the favor.
Sheila - I had to smile at your words.
Melissa - Whee! I'm excited. If I knew how to insert fireworks into the comments, there'd be some right here. I hope you'll visit and comment again.