January - The Novel
We've had a run of spring-like days for a week or so, and it's been wonderful. Some birds are building nests. And I know for a fact what some of the doves are up to. But the grass is still brown. And no buds are poking out on any tree I've seen.
But yesterday, the winds blew in. With a vengeance. And this morning our temps are near freezing, but it's supposed to be sunny and reach the mid-sixties today.
I just looked at the ten-day weather forecast for San Antonio. By the end of the week, winter will have returned. At least for a few days. So much for spring beginning in January.
It dawned on me that our recent weather pattern is a lot like the pacing of a novel.
Back around the first of the month, we had a few days where the temps stayed below freezing all day. That would be the inciting incident. The beginning of your story. The event that changes everything for your protagonist, Suzy Sunshine.
This isn't normal winter weather here, so people were unprepared. Some had broken water pipes. Others wouldn't go outside. Lots of things. So this is when Suzy suffers problem after problem. She fixes one, two more pop up.
Then it rained. Like crazy. At one point it rained about 24 hours straight. That's when you really dump on all your characters, especially Suzy. By the bucketful.
Then came spring. We thought. Ms. Sunshine has a plan! It's a good one. She's positive it will work.
But the W-I-N-D! This plan of hers suddenly doesn't look so good. In fact, it seems to be heading in the wrong direction entirely.
Winter is back. Suzy Sunshine is huddled in her boots and parka worse off than when she started.
But what's this? A bud on the pear tree! Suzy has a much improved plan. She'll see to it that this one will work!
And what do you know. That old pear tree is loaded with beautiful white blossoms. And Suzy Sunshine overcomes the odds, accomplishes her goal, and lives happily ever after.
The End.
But yesterday, the winds blew in. With a vengeance. And this morning our temps are near freezing, but it's supposed to be sunny and reach the mid-sixties today.
I just looked at the ten-day weather forecast for San Antonio. By the end of the week, winter will have returned. At least for a few days. So much for spring beginning in January.
It dawned on me that our recent weather pattern is a lot like the pacing of a novel.
Back around the first of the month, we had a few days where the temps stayed below freezing all day. That would be the inciting incident. The beginning of your story. The event that changes everything for your protagonist, Suzy Sunshine.
This isn't normal winter weather here, so people were unprepared. Some had broken water pipes. Others wouldn't go outside. Lots of things. So this is when Suzy suffers problem after problem. She fixes one, two more pop up.
Then it rained. Like crazy. At one point it rained about 24 hours straight. That's when you really dump on all your characters, especially Suzy. By the bucketful.
Then came spring. We thought. Ms. Sunshine has a plan! It's a good one. She's positive it will work.
But the W-I-N-D! This plan of hers suddenly doesn't look so good. In fact, it seems to be heading in the wrong direction entirely.
Winter is back. Suzy Sunshine is huddled in her boots and parka worse off than when she started.
But what's this? A bud on the pear tree! Suzy has a much improved plan. She'll see to it that this one will work!
And what do you know. That old pear tree is loaded with beautiful white blossoms. And Suzy Sunshine overcomes the odds, accomplishes her goal, and lives happily ever after.
The End.
Comments
In one of my works on the back-burner, weather is almost like a main character or part of the theme. I've read other books that have worked in the same way.
Lee
Terry - Exactly!
Stephen Tremp
Stephen - Thanks. I'm glad you like the blog and keep visiting.
Lee
All the same all the time would be incredibly boring, whether it's the weather or writing. Imagine a book where it's sunny all the time and everyone's happy all the time. That would be dull.
Back to topic...I write best when the weather is bad, cold, snowy, rainy, and the house is cozy and inviting. So as much as I have complained about our very cold winter this year, it's been good to get me focused on the novel in progress.
Look forward to following your writing journey!
Karen
Elspeth - Texas has weather like that, too. I agree about the boring part.
Karen - Welcome! I love new readers and friends. Hope you enjoyed San Antonio.
Then at noon, the sun came out! Everything bright and warm (60 degrees). Yay. Off for a walk and breath of moisture-free air.
Now, late afternoon. There was a coup. The clouds have taken over. The mist is back. Still trying to convince the other droplets to become torrential bullies.
All this. One day.
Loved your story. Do enjoy happy endings!
Karen - Most definitely spiders.
Conda - Thank you :)
Being Susie Sunshine myself today, I`ll post something about OUR weather! Put on your mittens while reading, though!
However, if you'd like to read some of my short stories, please visit my website:
http://www.carolkilgore.net
There's a listing of all my short stories there with links to the ones that are available online.
Enjoy!
As for how it's like a novel- I totally agree and love your comparison. Not to mention it gave me the opportunity to kvetch about this strange weather.
Southpaw - Thanks for stopping by. Comments are always open.