Chasing Squirrels
Woof and Arf love to chase squirrels.
Not a big surprise - they're dogs.
What is a big surprise is that yesterday Arf almost caught one. If that squirrel hadn't flicked up his tail at the last quarter second, it would've been between Arf's teeth. And I'm sure I would've been hauling a bawling Arf to the vet.
As it was, Arf believed that squirrel was Houdini himself - a master escape artist.
Since I'm smack in the middle of drafting a new manuscript, this little scene got me thinking about people and characters. We all have our Arf moments. Something is in our grasp. We know it's ours. Then - poof- it's gone. As it it were never there to begin with.
Think how that makes you feel. Perplexed, for starters. Depending on the situation, it can go in different directions from that point, but the general direction will be downhill.
Now apply that to your characters. Don't let the strong ones always get their way. Let another one snatch your protagonist's birthday cake out from under her nose just as she's blowing out the candles.
It should give you a good twist - just when you need one.
Not a big surprise - they're dogs.
What is a big surprise is that yesterday Arf almost caught one. If that squirrel hadn't flicked up his tail at the last quarter second, it would've been between Arf's teeth. And I'm sure I would've been hauling a bawling Arf to the vet.
As it was, Arf believed that squirrel was Houdini himself - a master escape artist.
Since I'm smack in the middle of drafting a new manuscript, this little scene got me thinking about people and characters. We all have our Arf moments. Something is in our grasp. We know it's ours. Then - poof- it's gone. As it it were never there to begin with.
Think how that makes you feel. Perplexed, for starters. Depending on the situation, it can go in different directions from that point, but the general direction will be downhill.
Now apply that to your characters. Don't let the strong ones always get their way. Let another one snatch your protagonist's birthday cake out from under her nose just as she's blowing out the candles.
It should give you a good twist - just when you need one.
Comments
Elspeth
Helen
Straight From Hel
Helen - Thanks for the heads up. That's a good point to keep in mind.
Conda - Thanks. I love surprises.
Sheila - I'm sure the squirrel did win. Greyhounds are much faster than Arf, a Blue Heeler, and Woof, a Border Collie. Letting go can be a good thing! Thanks for commenting.
I can't remember what writing book I was reading, but it said something like, "If you feel your plot bogging down, have someone pull a gun." They weren't necessarily speaking literally. What they meant was to make something unexpected happen, mix things up a little (or a lot). Something that should happen, doesn't. Or something just goes terribly, terribly wrong.