See the World
Remember when you were little and everything was done for you? Someone cooked and cleaned and fed your dog or cat. Someone washed your clothes, washed your hair. Someone brought in money and paid the bills. Someone took care of you when you were sick. Someone drove you to dance class and ball practice.
Now you're an adult. That "someone" is you.
If you're a writer, you have to take as much care of the characters you create as you do yourself and your human family.
You have the responsibility to give them life each time they appear on the page. Not only your protagonist and main characters, but the secondary and tertiary characters,too. Especially the antagonist. And even the walk-ons. Those walk-ons are there for a reason. If they're not, then they need to go. Or several need to be combined into one.
Giving life to your characters is more than writing about facts that would appear on a driver's license. Live in his or her head for a little while. Really put yourself there.
Go outside and take a walk around the block in your characters' shoes.
In the manuscript I just completed, the main character is a woman trying to outlive the man who wants to kill her. She's extremely aware of her surroundings and the body language of the people she meets. Her point of view is filtered through those priorities.
The antagonist thinks he's king of the world. He's the baddest, smartest dude in the sandbox. No one would dare try anything with him. When you take that same walk with him, you see the block from a different perspective. You don't spot the places someone could hide. You don't think about the dangers of deep doorways. Instead, you think about how stupid some people are. How they invite anyone to break into their houses and cars and don't even know it. How easy it would be to befriend one of the women out walking. Especially one woman.
Go take a walk with your characters. It'll do all of you good.
Now you're an adult. That "someone" is you.
If you're a writer, you have to take as much care of the characters you create as you do yourself and your human family.
You have the responsibility to give them life each time they appear on the page. Not only your protagonist and main characters, but the secondary and tertiary characters,too. Especially the antagonist. And even the walk-ons. Those walk-ons are there for a reason. If they're not, then they need to go. Or several need to be combined into one.
Giving life to your characters is more than writing about facts that would appear on a driver's license. Live in his or her head for a little while. Really put yourself there.
Go outside and take a walk around the block in your characters' shoes.
In the manuscript I just completed, the main character is a woman trying to outlive the man who wants to kill her. She's extremely aware of her surroundings and the body language of the people she meets. Her point of view is filtered through those priorities.
The antagonist thinks he's king of the world. He's the baddest, smartest dude in the sandbox. No one would dare try anything with him. When you take that same walk with him, you see the block from a different perspective. You don't spot the places someone could hide. You don't think about the dangers of deep doorways. Instead, you think about how stupid some people are. How they invite anyone to break into their houses and cars and don't even know it. How easy it would be to befriend one of the women out walking. Especially one woman.
Go take a walk with your characters. It'll do all of you good.
Comments
I do, however, understand what you mean. Instead of looking at your character from afar, get into his/her skin and see them from the inside-out.
Helen
Straight From Hel
I wouldn't want to meet my antagonist on a dark street, that's for sure.
Walk around a park
Walk downtown at night (very scary with your antagonist)
If you write about places local to you, go where your scene is happening and hang out long enough to experience it from each character who will be there.
Rats. I was so sure there was a market for that one. :-)
Best Regards, Galen
Imagineering Fiction Blog
I discovered your blog through Helen Ginger's post about you. Just wanted to say hi from a fellow San Antonio writer.
Lillie Ammann
A Writer's Words, An Editor's Eye
We've been in San Antonio for about six months now. Love it! Although it's been a little warm the past couple months. Nice to meet a local.
I have a friend who is an actress and says that she can play any character! Princess, whore, murderer...I have something of everyone in me, she says, and must only let it rise in me. Good way to approach character inventing, too, I guess. Greetings from Germany!
I understand what your actress friend means. Writers must be the same way and let those parts in them rise. We play the parts on the page rather on the stage. I'm so happy you stopped by.
A tiki hut is a thatched roof structure found on tropical beaches. The term 'tiki' is mostly found in the South Pacific, I think. Since I started the blog when I lived on the South Texas coast, I should have used the Spanish word 'palapa' - what the same type of structure is called in Mexico, but I took a little literary license because I liked Tiki Hut better.