Monday, May 1, 2017

From Cover to Cover


I'm happy to see you. Although I'm still working on pulling the trilogy together, the Tiki Hut is alive and well. Drinks are on the house today!

Also, I'm still in the business of drumming up subscribers for my newsletter. You're all invited to join! Thanks so much to you who already have.

The newsletter will be sporadic, depending solely on book-related news and/or events. It will be as short as possible.

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This month, I'm happy to share a special writer with you. His name is Tom Turner, and he's the author of the Charlie Crawford mystery series set in Palm Beach, Florida.

I first met Tom back in March, when he inquired about being a guest here. We agreed on May. When he sent me his post a couple of weeks ago, I almost fell off my chair--in a very good way.

So I'm pasting the whole thing I received from him below. I snagged his photo and bio from his website.

Once again, Tom. Thank you. And thank you for sharing blogging space with me.

Hi Carol,
Hope you like it.
All-time lamest cliche— You can’t judge a book by its cover. Oh, yeah? Newsflash! Everyone does.
My first book was traditionally published—boy, was it ever a bad experience. And the cover they foisted off on me… awful. So I decided to go down the self-publishing road. What immediately became apparent to me was that there were a million hacks out there—literally— whose books had five typo’s per page and covers that a kid in fifth grade art class could do. So to be taken seriously and not just sell a total of seventeen copies to families and friends, I needed to be scrupulous in my editing and bite the bullet for good covers. My first cover cost me $575, but it was worth every penny. My third one—by the same cover designer—just won an award. Just like typos, a bad cover screams amateur. Or worse— clueless, incompetent amateur. (Caution: A good cover can land you a reader but you then need to deliver with the rest of the package.)
Okay, the reason I came up with this subject in the first place, after racking my brain for a few days, was looking at Carol’s website. (No, she did not slip me a few buck to say any nice things, but fact is, her stuff is fabulous!) From the mysterious-looking, sexy babes on her covers—hey, how come there isn’t one on Never Say My Name?—to what’s got to be the best website header, she obviously works hard really to make it all great. So, bottom line, to stand out from the crowd—no easy trick—save you money and get a really good cover designer and edit, edit, edit… oh, yeah, and while you’re at it, it helps to write a good book. 
If you need a couple of good designers, email me:

Tom Turner

A native New Englander, Tom Turner ran a bar in Vermont after college, then moved to New York and spent time as an award-winning copywriter at several Manhattan advertising agencies.

After years of post-Mad Men life, he made a radical change and got a job in commercial real estate. A few years later he ended up in Palm Beach, buying, renovating and selling houses. On the side, he wrote Palm Beach Nasty, its sequel, Palm Beach Poison, and a screenplay, Underwater.

While at a wedding, he fell for the charm of Charleston, South Carolina, and moved there. He recently completed his third novel entitled, Killing Time in Charleston.

Tom asked why there isn't a sexy babe on Never Say My Name. 

The answer is because "Never Say My Name" is a short story that acts as a prequel to In Name Only. I wanted it to look different so readers wouldn't think--even though it actually says in the description it is a short story--that they were getting a full novel.

The lead characters in my books all smiled when I told them Tom thinks they're sexy babes. Gabe, Jake, and Dave, however. . . .

I'll be back here on Monday, June 5, with a big surprise. Don't miss it!

Monday, April 3, 2017

A Guest and a Giveaway!

For those of you participating in A to Z, you're off to a good start. Congratulations!

For everyone else, this is the regular April post at the Tiki Hut.

Whichever works for you.

It's been a while since I've hosted a guest, but I have one this month and one next month. My April guest is Hank Quense, introduced to me via the fab Mason Canyon at MC Book Tours.

Y'all have a great month. I'll be around, still working on trilogy and blog related things. You'll see a few changes going on here. No worries - it's just me. Unless you see something truly weird and un-Tiki-like. In which case, please let me know.

One last bit of information before I turn you over to my guest. You're all invited to subscribe to my newsletter!
It will be sporadic, depending solely on book-related news and/or events.
It will be as short as possible.
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Thanks in advance for your support.

It’s a pleasure to be participating in the Blog Tour for CREATING STORIES by Hank Quense through MC Book Tours.

Do you have a story in you? Do you know how to write it or how to tell it? Well, CREATING STORIES has the answers. In addition, Hank is offering a tour-wide giveaway featuring of five (5) eBooks of CREATING STORIES and three (3) print copies of the author’s MOXIE'S PROBLEM (U.S. entries only). See how you can enter to win below. If you don’t want to wait to win a copy of CREATING STORIES, Hank is offering a special ‘half price’ sale that will only be available during his tour (March 20 through April 14).

Hank, the author of more than twenty books, tells you how to write your story. He believes that stories come from the melding of three elements: getting ideas, story design, and story-telling. Ideas have to come from the author. CREATING STORIES covers the last two.

Creating Stories
by Hank Quense
  • Published by Strange World Publishing
  • AVAILABLE April 1, 2017
  • $8.99, 9947 KB, 105 Pages
  • Genre: Fiction Writing
  • ASIN: B01MZ6E3EM

          The book concentrates on developing characters including such rarely discussed requirements such as a dominant reader emotion and the character's biography.
          Plots are also covered in depth and a number of graphics are included to illustrate complex points. Another topic discusses subplots and how to utilize them and how to nest them within the main plot.
          A separate chapter discusses the relationship between the plot and the emotional arcs.
Other topics covered are character arcs, scene design, point-of-view, writing voice.

Be sure to add CREATING STORIES to your shelf on Goodreads.

 Here's a brief excerpt:

From chapter 5 of Creating Stories
Think about your protagonist.  He has to solve a plot problem.  That's the character's job.  Your character has to get up off the couch, go out into the cruel world and possibly risk his life in order to solve the problem.
Why should he go through all this effort?  That's the question you, the author, have to answer.  What's the character's motivation?  Why does he feel he has to solve the problem?  Why doesn't he say, "Let someone else do it."  Or, "I'm too busy." Or, "Maybe I'll do it later."
The lack of proper motivation is a death knell for a story.  The reader will never buy into a story in which the protagonist has a half-hearted motive.  Not only does the character have to be truly motivated, the author has to convince the reader that the character's motivation is real; that the character truly believes he has to solve the plot problem.  The more serious the plot problem is, the stronger the motivation has to be.  You can't have a dilatory effort to track down a serial killer.  Nor can you have an all-out effort by the entire cast to find a Mother's Day card.  If the characters are risking their lives, the motivation has to reflect the seriousness of the situation.
Simply put, motivation is what drives the protagonist to solve the plot problem and it's what drives the antagonist to struggle to prevent the good guy from succeeding.  Both the protagonist and the antagonist have to be motivated and these two motivations have to be commensurate in strength.  You can't have a highly motivated protagonist facing off against an antagonist who is only mildly motivated.
To complicate the motivation problem, the motivation has to be consistent with the character's persona.  A meek, mild-mannered character can’t suddenly start acting like a combat-experienced mercenary. 
Motivation is another area where what you can do and what the character can do is limited by the character you built.  Motivation has to be in sync with the DRE, the philosophy and the bio you gave the character.  If all these elements don’t match each other, the character's actions will not be believable, because his actions from scene to scene will not be consistent.
Inner and outer motivation:  A complex character, the kind readers love, should have both outer and inner motivation.  The outer motive is fairly easy to develop.  It is usually based on solving the plot problem.  Once this problem is resolved, the outer motive has been met.  The inner motive is more complicated.  It can be almost anything and doesn't have to be related to the plot problem.  The best combination of motives is a pair of mutually exclusive ones; the protagonist can't achieve one without giving up the other.  This constraint sets up natural internal conflict in the character and can lead to unexpected plot twists that will keep the reader involved.  Effectively, the author has constructed an engine of motivation and anti-motivation.
As an example of conflicting inner and outer motives, consider this situation: the protagonist has to rescue a man trapped on a mountain.  He does this because it's his job.  That's the protag's outer motive.  But the rescued man is engaged to the woman the protag loves.  That is the protag's inner motive; to romance the woman of his dreams whom he'll lose if he succeeds with his outer motive.  It is easy to see the great internal conflict that will harass this protagonist.  Should he let the guy die and then try to marry the woman?  Should he rescue the guy and lose the woman?
This combination of competing inner and outer motives can draw readers into the story and hold them.  Will the character murder for love or selflessly lose the woman?  Whatever he does, it must be consistent with his persona.  If he is narcissistic, he may choose murder.  If he is law-abiding, he may elect to save the guy.  Whatever he chooses to do, his motivation must be made clear to the reader.
Antagonist's motivation:  Successful stories need conflict, tension and emotions from more than just the protagonist.  If a properly motivated protagonist strives to solve the plot problem and doesn't encounter an equally motivated antagonist, the story will lack the conflict that produces the tension that leads to emotional outbursts.  Hence, the author must develop strong motives for the bad guy to keep the struggle equal.  The stronger the bad guy's motives, the stronger the story will be.
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If you have any questions or comments on this material, leave a note and I'll respond.

About the Author:

Hank Quense writes humorous and satiric sci-fi and fantasy stories. 

He also writes and lectures about fiction writing and self-publishing. He has published 19 books and 50 short stories along with dozens of articles. He often lectures on fiction writing and publishing and has a series of guides covering the basics on each subject. He is currently working on a third Moxie novel that takes place in the Camelot era.

He and his wife, Pat, usually vacation in another galaxy or parallel universe. They also time travel occasionally when Hank is searching for new story ideas.

You can connect with Hank on his Amazon Author Page.

You can check out the schedule and follow Hank’s tour by clicking HERE.


This tour-wide giveaway is for five (5) eBooks of CREATING STORIES and three (3) print copies of the author’s MOXIE'S PROBLEM (U.S. entries only). The prizes are courtesy of the publisher. The giveaway will end at 12 a.m. (EST) on Tuesday, April 18.

To enter, click on the Rafflecopter widget below and follow the instructions. Carol here. In the past, Rafflecopter has refused to acknowledge my existence. So if this link from Mason doesn't work, check at the MC Book Tours site and find out where to go to sign up.

Thanks for stopping by today. Be sure to check out Hank’s book.

I'll be back here with a new guest on
Monday, May 1

Monday, March 6, 2017

I Did It!


The trilogy I've been working on for a couple of years now is finally complete and with my editor. All three books. 953 pages. 215,184 words.

Yet ... now I miss the heroine, Gracie Hofner. We shared so much during all these months. I miss our talks. Her smile. It's as if my best friend has moved away. Or gone on a long vacation.

While she's gone, though, I have much to do. I've made a list of Gracie things to do in order to get the book ready for publication. I've made another list of things I've let slide that I need to do in real life.

It took a while, but I finally prioritized items on the lists into a workable order. I don't know if I'll complete everything on the lists, but I do want to get the most urgent items accomplished while Gracie is getting massaged into shape by my editor's skilled hands.

Here are three lines--one from each book--which may or may not be included in the final published versions by the time I'm really finished with them.

Gracie Micro Fiction
Cold! Cold!
Ow! Ow! Ow!
Oh, crap.

You didn't think I'd really tell you anything important yet, did you? I haven't even shared the titles of the trilogy or the first book.

One of the big items I want to accomplish this month is to get my newsletter started and rolled out. Actually, I'll be happy to get it started, even if it isn't live by the end of March. I feel as if I'm stumbling into a bat cave blindfolded and handcuffed.

I hope I'm able to laugh about that feeling in a few months.

April is right around the corner, and as usual, it's A to Z month. Have you participated before? Are you going to participate this year?

If you're on the fence about whether to sign up, I highly urge you to give it a try. It's well worth the effort you'll put into it. It's a ton of fun. Warning: Prepare and schedule all your posts ahead of time. You'll find out why.

I'm not participating again this year. A to Z and Gracie Brain are a bit at odds with each other. But I'm pretty sure I'm going to find some interesting topics out there I won't be able to resist.

Next month, a guest blogger will be here. I'll still be around, but I'll mostly be busy working on other things. I do hope you'll stop in and see what he's all about. I'll still be visiting you.

And ... on Monday, March 20, I will be part of a blog post for International Day of Happiness at The Pursuit of Happiness blog. I hope you'll drop by and read what I have to say.

Next Blog Date:
Day C - Monday, April 3
🙂 C is for Carol's Blog 🙂